Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Second Draft Complete!

That was fast.

I've gone through the screenplay, making a couple minor changes to the dialogue-- stuff that nobody would likely notice except for myself. After much debate with Aaron, who wanted to add a character personifying pompus art critics, I also added a brief new scene, between Owen and his old art teacher.

I've sent the first draft out to several friends, and am still waiting to hear their comments on it (you know who you are. If you're one of them, get busy and critique my work!) As soon as I get their feedback, I plan to impliment as many of their constructive criticisms as I find helpful, and prepare to finalize the screenplay. Once that's finished, then the real fun can begin.

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